Rewrite Drills 50｜弱い英語→強い英語：置換で伸ばす
やることは単純：曖昧→確定、長い→短い、感情→運用。毎日5本で激変する。
やり方：左を声に出す → 右を声に出す → 右を自分の案件に置換 → 1行でメールに貼る。
ドリル（50本）
Weak
Please reply soon.
Strong
Could you confirm by Friday EOD?
Weak
I will check.
Strong
Let me check and get back to you by 3pm.
Weak
It’s expensive.
Strong
It’s above our budget. Can we get it under $___?
Weak
Maybe we can do it.
Strong
We can do it if we reduce scope or extend the timeline.
Weak
We have a problem.
Strong
We identified an issue: ___. Root cause is ___. Fix is ___.
Weak
Can you do it?
Strong
Could you take ownership and complete it by ___?
Weak
It’s okay.
Strong
Looks good to me. I approve.
Weak
We need to talk.
Strong
Can we do a 15-minute call to align on next steps?
Weak
Please explain.
Strong
Could you walk me through the logic behind ___?
Weak
I think it’s wrong.
Strong
I see a mismatch between ___ and ___. Can we verify the data source?
Weak
Send me the file.
Strong
Could you send the latest version and confirm it’s final?
Weak
We are late.
Strong
We’re at risk of missing the deadline. We need a decision by ___.
Weak
It’s not possible.
Strong
It’s not feasible with the current constraints: ___. Options are A or B.
Weak
I’m busy.
Strong
I can’t today. I’m available tomorrow 2–4pm.
Weak
The price is included.
Strong
It’s included in the price at no additional charge.
Weak
We will try.
Strong
We can commit to ___ if we get ___ by ___.
Weak
We need more details.
Strong
To proceed, we need: (1) ___ (2) ___ (3) ___.
Weak
I don’t understand.
Strong
When you say “___,” do you mean ___ or ___?
Weak
Let’s do it later.
Strong
Let’s schedule it for next week. Does Tuesday 10am work?
Weak
We need approval.
Strong
Who can sign off? We need approval by ___ to stay on schedule.
Weak
It changed.
Strong
Scope changed. This requires a change order for ___.
Weak
We disagree.
Strong
We see it differently. Let’s align on success criteria first.
Weak
It’s too much.
Strong
This exceeds capacity. We need to deprioritize ___ or add resources.
Weak
We fixed it.
Strong
We resolved it and added a safeguard to prevent recurrence.
Weak
Ok?
Strong
Can you confirm in writing?
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We need money.
Strong
We’re raising $___ to achieve ___ by ___.
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We are growing.
Strong
We’re growing at ___% MoM, driven by ___.
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The customer left.
Strong
They churned due to ___. We’re addressing it by ___.
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It’s better.
Strong
Performance improved by ___% after ___.
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We will send later.
Strong
I’ll send it by ___ with numbers and dates.
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It’s not included.
Strong
That’s out of scope. We can quote it separately.
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We can’t.
Strong
We can’t commit to that timeline, but we can do ___ by ___.
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I’m sorry.
Strong
Thanks for your patience—here’s the update.
Weak
It’s unclear.
Strong
We need to clarify the definition of “___” before we proceed.
Weak
Let’s meet sometime.
Strong
Can we meet for 20 minutes on Thursday at 1pm?
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